Before entering into a new relationship, Andrea meets with Ian, a long lost boyfriend, to seek his support. Completed for the MCat “Do it in 72″ Contest. All writing, shooting and editing took place over 72 hours. *This was for a 72 hour film competition that I participated in here in Missoula, MT. A better quality export is on the way! Crew: Director – Becca Sayre Writer – Michael Emmons Producer – Marcus Chebul DP – Alfred Gaither Editor – Becca Sayre Lighting Tech – Ryan Cole Sound – Marcus Chebul PA – Christopher Nagata *I give full credit to the soundtrack ‘Stay Awhile’ Written and performed by Pterodactyl Plains – available on the album ‘Raven.’ Cast: Andrea – Ashley McKee, Ian – Cheyenne Adamson, Josh – Marcus Chebul, Chef – Ryan Cole Facebook fan page: www.facebook.com IMDb – Cheyenne Adamson: www.imdb.com Grubstake Films: www.facebook.com
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The? acting seems very natural, as if it’s two people genuinely having a conversation.
that was decent.? Practice makes perfect i guess
hmm I’m a little confused…?
I LOVED THIS!!! -3? GREAT JOB!
AMAZING? :O
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Try a different font as well, this one looks a bit unprofessional.
The script was well written and I liked the shoulder shots you did from Andrea’s side, the lighting and overall picture quality on them looked good.
It was? a cute story.
There was room for improvement, but for having the whole project completed in 72 hours, it’s not bad. I’d like to see what you could do given more time. Well done
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Alright, my opinion is that:
The acting on the original boyfriend’s part was pretty good.
The girls acting was also pretty good at some parts, but was lacking in some parts, specifically in the segment in which she said “That’s not true Ian,” it felt scripted.
You definitely need better audio, perhaps investing in an external mic would be a good idea.
You should’ve should’ve? shot some over the shoulder’s from his perspective.
Try to keep the lighting just a bit more consistent.
hmmm,? you emailed this to me. If you want my opinion, I would have to say I hate all of the characters, because I related to them on some level in the past, which means you portrayed life in the hellish twenties, don’t stop filming.
Very well? done. Believable and poignant.
nice? try ! I want to be helpful and i would recommend you to keep working to make the acting seem more natural ! I think the script was nice but it had only a superficial aspect and the basic feeling is barely implied and not shown through words,her eyes or any other way.
Nice job. Keep at it for sure!?
hmmm… interesting. This vid may leave some viewers to think of the first guy being dead and the scene to be like a scene in the movie “Ghost” with Demi? and Patrick.
done
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absolutely
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Story line? was good …I hope to see more of your work soon ..keep it up!
Thanks? Captain Walker!
you are a natural! don’t stop and I assure you, you will win an Academy Award someday……
look like a starr to me!?
Loved? this!!! Thumbs Up G
I liked the acting and editing was done well , but however I would have done close up of her eyes and her thinking while camera zooms out and then he shows up and says hi. Sometimes eyes will show more emotion then dialog. But all in all good job.?
Meh… The lighting is not to my liking and her? acting abilities… did she drink actual Sake? Maybe she’s just buzzed. Who knows. I loved his acting. Its good.
great?
Pretty decent. Camera shots were well done. I like the concept of? the story. But, similar to what others have commented, the acting on the part of the young lady was not not very emotionally portrayed of someone struggling with moving on. The male lead was better…but both appeared to be appearing to have emotion for one another. But no true chemistry was evident. Camera work and the music was good. Thank you for inviting me to watch your budding artistry. Deb (ctom_1985
I liked it!:) cool idea, well developed. But I think it would be better if the girl put more emotion into her lines. Overall it? was pretty good though! good job!
Simple story well? told!
Really good, don’t see a lot of serious works on youtube, but you did a great? job! keep at it man.